The Death-Defyer

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Thursday, 28-Aug-2008 15:47:21

I have watched helplessly
As they threew life away, so carelessly.
I have felt within me
As my life drained right out of me.
I have walked to Death's door
And from the dark, I have returned,
I have felt my life swiftly burn,
I have felt the living funeral pyre
Burning with all its insidious fire,
I have seen the end of my life,
Acknowledged that it could have come.
I have defied Death before,
I have stood laughing at its door,
And let go in to oblivion,
Knowing I will surely live.
I have felt them take my life away,
And known I will wake to see another day.
I have laughed in the face of fear,
Smiled as Death descended on dark shadow over my consciousness,
For I knew I would return.
I have been a lifeless husk,
A soulless shell in a deep deep sleep,
With a smile on my face because I could see
I would open my eyes
To behold another sunrise
And in joy I walked from that place,
Because I have laughed in Death's face.

Post 2 by SunshineAndRain (I'm happily married, a mom of two and a fulltime college student.) on Thursday, 28-Aug-2008 16:33:17

Wow I liked it. It was awesome. I wish I could write like that.

Post 3 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Saturday, 30-Aug-2008 13:57:19

That comes easily. I don't understand why everyone ooohs over it... I'm just writing. Oh well.

Post 4 by Tarja (too buisy for life) on Thursday, 11-Sep-2008 5:31:51

lol you're a gifted writer girl

Post 5 by Grimspective (Generic Zoner) on Saturday, 13-Sep-2008 21:41:49

Easy or not this is very well done.

Post 6 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 21-Sep-2008 0:19:15

I love it! Its amazing! Please check out my board posts and coment them please!

Post 7 by midnight sun (you can't catch me, i'm the palobread man) on Thursday, 02-Oct-2008 4:46:23

yes, i like this alot too. and honestly, writing is not so easy for everyone i don't think. i often feel inspired and go to try and write, but as soon as i try my mind goes black as a blank screen and i am not even able to think, so goodbye writing. lol

Post 8 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Thursday, 02-Oct-2008 15:36:05

Oh god I know how that feels. It's like, I want to say something, but it's just too complex and it... goes away.